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DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN YOU OR HETALIA.

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The Italian quickly pushed you down onto the floor and stared at you with his cold, flaming eyes. You regretted watching what you had seen, since Feliciano seemed furious about that. He took your wrist and pressed them onto the floor with your body. You tried turning your head so you wouldn't meet his gaze, but his eyes wouldn't let you. You felt like it pulled you into him, closer and closer…

"F-feliciano…?"

You stammered, trying to stop trembling. Feliciano leaned closer towards you, breathing hot breaths on your neck. You shivered, and he swiftly shifted to your left chest and leaned against it.

"Does your heart always beat this fast?"

You shook your head, remembering the sight you saw in the blood-stained room. You felt a cold, electric wave down your whole body. You started to breathe very quickly, as though you were suffocating. You hadn't realized Feliciano was gliding his hand down your waist. He flicked a knife out of nowhere and cut your thigh. You felt pain sting and you screamed.

"I told you that you're going to have a punishment, bella."

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You quickly felt a warm light pouring through the windows, and you found yourself back in bed, next to Feliciano. As you moved, the Italian woke up and smiled.

"Where are you going?"

"Nowhere. But can you please tell me who you are?"

"Do you really want to know?"

You nod, and Feliciano pulled you in closer. You didn't flinch. Then he whispered in your ears something you didn't expect.

"I am Feliciano's alter-ego. Feliciano Vargas' true feelings."
:iconcandyapplekiss:
I don't own Hetalia or you.

I LEFT YOU ALL ON A CLIFF HANGER!
I AM THE MOST EVIL PERSON ON EARTH!
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Part One: [link]
Part Two: [link]
Part Three: [link]
Part Four: [link]
Part Five (FINAL): You are here~
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~PurpleBird13 May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;v; -sniffle- B-buh....KONO YARO! You killed F-feli....-goes to cry in a corner- Why...?!?! :iconsawbplz:
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~CandyAppleKiss May 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I DUN NO EITHER m(TT_TT)m
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Mood: Adoration ~EmoHetaliaJapan May 8, 2013  New member Student Writer
awesome! i didnt know you wrote this to your so creative i loved it m first reaction *part 1* probaly going to get raped.. other than that awesome story the picture is so freaking cute
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:iconbiosyblingingfreaks:
okay, I know what a lemon is, but not a lime. I read it anyways, but what is lime?
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~NaminexUtau May 12, 2013  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty much the same thing, only with less detail. Like, you now what's going on, but you don't know every single detail.
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:iconbiosyblingingfreaks:
I don't mind those as much. I hate it when I am reading a good story, then it goes lemon. this was okay
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~BigACC Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P-Please continue! Please... I-It's really good... But... Please continue... Please......
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~yuffie-fair Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Non! no cliff hangers I will tickle u death proceeds to tickle u
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WHY MUST CLIFF HANGERS DERP US ALL?!!!?!!
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~grimtales1lizzybird Mar 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconfrancehankieplz: why leave us on this cliff hanger!?!
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