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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN YOU OR HETALIA!

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You looked at yourself in the mirror again. You woke up very early so you could prepare yourself for the date Alfred planned for you. You tied a small, white bow in your hair and brushed a little bit of make-up on. You even shuffled through your whole closet to find a cool black-and-white tank-top and a black jean jacket to wear over it. You slipped into a cute red layered skirt that reached half-way down your thighs. Then you put on some black, knee-high socks that had tiny laces. You grabbed your backpack and slid your foot into red converse. You quickly head out before you could change your mind to go back in and wear your normal clothes. It took you a lot of gut to walk out like that, you know.

When you got to school, everyone stared at you. Sometimes you weren't sure if it was because it looked silly on you, or if you actually looked good. Well, there weren't any laughter going around in the halls, so you remained optimistic. You went up to your locker and found a small, folded-up piece of paper inside. It said,

Meet me in the parking-lot after school, in the space nearest to the flagpole. BTW, you look real pretty. You should dress like that every day!

You blushed and neatly placed the paper in your left breast-pocket so you could keep it close to your heart.

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You still feel eyes on you as you walk over to Arthur's table at lunch. He was slowly trying to get up and avoid you, till you grabbed his wrist.

"Arthur, I need to talk to you."

He avoided your eyes, but he sat down anyways.

"I didn't know you were Alfred's step-brother."

He whipped his head to look at you.

"Let me guess, you're going on a date with that wanker."

"Yeah, Arthur. I hope you don't mind."

"Geez, ________, I can't believe you were such a nutcase!"

"He's not as bad as you think he is,"

You replied, even though you knew you knew nothing about him. The Brit groaned and let the subject drop. He didn't want to talk about it.

"Listen, Arthur, I know it's strange to see me dressed up like this, and still trying to talk to you like a normal friend from before, but—"

"I get it, alright? It is strange. But I still can't let go of the fact you used to be like me, a geek."

"I still am, okay? I'm still gonna get straight-A's, because I know I will."

"Well, that just makes you a smart, pretty, girl. Not a smart, dorky, geek."

"Thanks for the compliment, but I already suffered enough being dorky. You should try it out. I know you're really handsome."

For the rest of lunch, neither of you talked. You didn't know what happened between him and Alfred, but your heart couldn't stop beating for Alfred. You truly realized how much love can control you—it's unstoppable and exciting.

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You waited for Alfred to meet you at the pole, as planned. A red jeep pulled up, and you smiled. Alfred jumped out of the car and hugged you. You hugged him back.

"Ready for the date, _________?"

You nod and blush as he helps you into the car.

"Were you alright? I mean, your other friends like Matthew and Ivan…"

"It's fine. Some disagreed on the idea of me dating you, but I can ignore them. And how was your day at school?"

"Everyone seemed surprised because I dressed-up like this."

"I love it, ya know?"

He said as he winked at you. You felt your face turn red, nearly exploding. Alfred drove out of the school parking-lot and onto the street.

"Where exactly are we going?"

Alfred smiled into the review mirror. It's a surprise, you guessed. The American dressed up quite casually for the date today. He wore a white t-shirt that said "HERO" over the design of an American flag, and under that, he wore a gray long-sleeved shirt. He wore moss-green cargo pants and beige converse. Before you knew it, he drove into a beautiful area of town near the river docks. You've heard that near the river docks, there are many places for couples to chill out and have fun—and it was beautiful. The sun had started to set, and the street lamps flickered on. Crazy party music rang in the streets, and Alfred pulled you out.

"Sorry, did you not like loud music, babe?"

You blushed as he called you 'babe', it made you skip a beat in your heart. You spoke your true thoughts out.

"Perhaps somewhere slightly quieter would be nice."

Alfred put a thumbs-up sign and grinned. Hand in hand, you walked with him over to the dock. His large, bony, hands were warm and powerful. Near the dock was a large dance party, and without any warning, Alfred picked you up bride-style. You giggled as he did so. You heard a jazz music go on and Alfred's hand grabbed your waist while the other took your hand. You gently place your other free hand on the American's shoulder. You laughed as you two danced for a long time, from jazz to some tango that neither of you knew how to dance and fooled around with. Then, there was the waltz.

It was close to night, and the sky was sparkling with stars, and the moon's reflection was shone in the calm river waters.

"You're so cute, babe," Alfred complimented, "especially when you laugh and smile."

"Thanks," you stated, not knowing what else to say.

Alfred was so handsome. He was dazzling with a great smile and had sweet yet bold, blue eyes. His soft, blonde hair was golden like the sun, and his skin had a fair complexion that glows with a hint of pink. As he spun you around again, you were lost in your thoughts that you tripped and fell—right into Alfred's arms.

"Sorry, babe, let's take a break."

He carried you to the closest bench, and you rested your head on his broad shoulder. It was the best night you've ever had. Even though your ankle was hurt a little bit, you had enjoyed every moment being next to Alfred.

"Thank you so much… This is was the best day of my life."

"Then let me hear you say three words I want to hear."

You paused before saying them.

"I love you."

"I love you too, babe."

He pulled you into a sweet, gentle kiss. His lips were slightly chapped, but you didn't mind at all. The light taste of the chocolate he ate earlier entered your lips, and you smiled, breaking the kiss. The two of you laughed and kissed him again, a quick and chaste one. Then all of a sudden, fireworks lit the sky. You stood up and watched the sky as Alfred wrapped his arms around your waist and put his head on your shoulder. You can smell a relaxing scent of shampoo from the side.

"Thank you. You changed my life."
I hope you all loved it!
Thank you for so many favs and comments,
I really, really appericiate it!
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ZheAwesomeHetalian Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
the feels! soo adorable, keep writeing fanfictions! ♥ Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] 
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! :3 I really appreciate your comment! (Sorry for being so late at responding...)
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:iconcelestia-ludenberg11:
fluff overload
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ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
NEEDS SEQUEL!!!!! pls :3
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RussianLullabyTree Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Photographer
I love how you didn't tell us who said that last line!!! that's so romantic like they both changed eachother's lives!!!Bunny Emoji-18 (Shower Love) [V1] 
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for such a wonderful comment! I love that adorable bunny btw!! <3
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xXOneHellOfAGamerXx Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If Only Stuff Like This Really Happened.

*Is That Really Geeky Girl With That One Guy Friend*

Maybe I Should Try That Approach, Dress Up For School For Once.
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
Don't dress up a bit gain attention and I know it sounds really clichè but be yourself cuz then you'll find someone who loves you for you.
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angelstien10 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I thought i went to a fanfiction because badadada I'm lovin' it :iconmcdonaldsplz:
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angelstien10 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
after fanfiction I meant to put not mc donalds 
and instead of because put but
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SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
awwwwwww
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MissPinkGirl2890 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This was the best x reader insert I have read all day!
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Glad to hear that!! Thanks for reading!!
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PokeKirby87 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
Yay! I love fluff! *continues making out with america*
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Good, good! Thanks for reading!!
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LolizaChan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
...
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Fak I wished this actually happens.

*Is the geeky, straight A student that no one likes at school.*
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Keep dreaming! (Wow I sound cheesy) but seriously, you'll find your perfect match as long as you are willing, hopeful, and ready to face trouble. ;)
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LolizaChan Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
D'aw, danke much ;u;
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PokeKirby87 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
I am that girl too don't worry Ur not alone
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doughnutz007 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
42 the answer to everything.
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rin68 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No it's over 9000 LOL
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
woooooooooooow you just HAD to go their *rolls eyes* XD
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rin68 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but it was the perfect moment XD
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
true
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rin68 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaha
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
i'm the kind of person who can't leave a comment without a reply, and your comment has been in my inbox for a while... but now...
:iconicwhatudidthereplz: omg that game
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doughnutz007 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Thanks. Love the story!
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X-ImmortalHeichou-X Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Thank you. You changed my life"
my answer is -16.
hehe
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glaceon-master-18 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student General Artist
I <33333
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconmoesmileplz: thankies!
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glaceon-master-18 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconnpplz:
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PastelGothDreamer Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTHE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS
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DJRACHEL2 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
 thighs. - its in the story , umm about where it says "red skirt" ...and cuntinue untill you see it lol :D
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KathyBrine Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
GOD I HOPE WE CAN EXPERIMENT ON ANIMATION IN THE FUTURE....
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FrostSentry150 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh my god Al why aren't you real?! ;-; This is SOO cute! I always wanted a guy to do that for me... ;-; </3
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Angeliquediabla Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Really nice....
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
grazie! :3
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Lagoonaxjackson Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
D'awwwww!! :3
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AmazingEmily9999 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
D'AAAAWWWWWW
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HoodieSlenderverse Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this!~ Im making a Papa! X Child! Reader Insert for Prussia X Reader and im so happy on how yours came out!~ I hope mine comes out as great as yours did!~ ((Love your icon))
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I look forward to it! I'm sure you'll do well. I'm sorry fr not replying, I haven't been on dA for a while (maybe more than half a year). If you've got the time, please read my other fanfics. This one is my first, so it's not as good.
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HoodieSlenderverse Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
: P Replying means nothing. I will read more of yours!! ((I will make sure to : ) ))
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allieallred Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww  the FEELS, bro !!! THE FEELS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TTnTT
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Jenn0607 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
I really liked it! Though I wish the stuff with Artie got resolved. Not as like a Reader X iggy, but it dosnt feel like its a real ending with a problem still active. Arty dont hate us! TT_TT
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
sorry! it was my first ever series reader x country... please read the other ones when you have time! i think they are better than this one... X3
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Jenn0607 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
No no, it was good! But maybe you could write an epilogue discribing a sort if make up between reader and arty? That'd be awesome!
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I agree
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
omg loved it!!! This is why I am single all the boys that go to my school are asses or just don't like me and would never act like this... Also I am i love with fictional characters that don't exist T^T
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Yami-noTenshi Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think that story can apply to most of us here ((: Honestly I'd rather stay with my fictional characters that don't exist than end p with some immature asshole irl...
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ya I agree with you ficional characters will ever judge you or be asses to you! That is a eal you can't pass on!
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