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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN YOU OR HETALIA, GOT IT?!

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You wanted that moment to last forever. His warmth, the soft gaze and golden hair, those were futures you couldn't possibly look away. He let go of you hand and you shut your eyes, unaware of the strange feeling called love. It can be painful, yet beautiful. Alfred quickly hugged you and you opened your eyes.

"Under those glasses are beautiful ________* eyes, and your heart is so innocent and pure... I just hated to see you around that Brit, so I decided to act fast. I'm so sorry..."

No way, this can't be happening... Why...? Am I lucky, or unfortunate? Your arms reached for America's back, but you hesitated. You felt Alfred shed a tear, and you sighed.

"I'm a geek. You'll be rejected by your friends."

"I know."

"Why do you go so far?"

"Love is like a rollercoaster, and it really is—it's unstoppable."

You paused, gently pushing Alfred back. He cocked his head in a curious manner and you lifted the corners of your mouth and smiled slightly.

"How about I tell you some things about myself at the park nearby, and you'll tell me."

"Are you sure? Don't you usually study at the library after school?"

You giggled and smiled, a real, true smile.

"It's fine. I'm a straight-A student."

You couldn't keep calm though—it just was a completely new relationship you never experienced. Then, on the way to the park, the rain started to drizzle, then vanish. Alfred put the red umbrella away and smiles at you.

"Do you want to start telling me things about you now?"

"Uhm, s-sure, I guess."

You told him your birthday and favorite colors and all. He laughed and nodded a lot, and had made you feel comfortable. Then you told him things you wouldn't dare tell anyone, even Arthur.

"That's why you have..."

"Yes, I can't speak to people easily. Maybe it's just the fact that I'm scared of people looking at me."

"Well, you're doing your best."

You both were right in front of the park entrance. Then all of sudden, Alfred swiftly grabbed your left shoulder and snatched your glasses. Your eyes widened as you saw Alfred without the frames.

"What—"

"Look at me."

You did. His gaze was intense, yet kind and soft. You couldn't believe it. You were looking at someone without glasses! Then he pushed your glasses back onto your face. You adjusted it and blushed, quickly looking away.

"If you have any other problems, confront them to me. I'm sure that I can help out!"

"Ah, yes. I think I will do that."

"So…"

Alfred took his cell-phone out.

"Wanna tell me your phone number too?"

You shuffled through your school bag and flipped your phone out. You had recently switched your lame, crappy, and dull one for and average querty phone. You were glad you did. And so you both exchanged phone numbers and Alfred told you about himself. You found out that he loved hamburgers more than anything, and that he loves sports. And even the fact that he used to be Arthur's step-brother, but complex family relationships torn them apart, and now Alfred lives alone. That most certainly made you very surprised. When he explained more about himself, he stopped, and looked at you.

"And you. I met you at the entrance exam for high school."

"Really?!"

You said, shocked that all of this started at a random test-day for high school.

"Yeah. I mean, I got brains, but I decided to purposely fail. But when I saw you, you looked like the perfect, sweet, innocent girl. Judging by the looks, you looked like the typical 'straight-A student', so I sat up straight and passed it."

Your eyes widened and you couldn't believe it. Does love really go like that? Is that what you call love at first sight, or something?

"I entered, family problems became more complex, put my stress out on the other dudes and now, I'm considered a bully. It's so… irritating."

"Oh… I see…"

You said, trying to think of something else to say. You didn't know how to respond, because you were busy putting pieces together so it could make sense.

"Thanks, ________. This totally made my day. I'm so glad I can finally talk to you and all. How about a date tomorrow? Right after school."

"What?!"

"See ya tomorrow!"

And he walked off, leaving you with your mouth opened to say something, but… You couldn't help but smile. Now you have to find something reasonable to wear for this date. Oh, and at that moment, you completely forgot about school and Arthur till you went back home and opened your school bag to do your homework.

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Hey! If you have brown eyes, insert this into the blank: "soft, earthy brown"
If you have hazel: "dreamy gleam to your hazel"
If you have blue: "angelic and baby-blue"
If you have green: "ocean green" and after the word 'eyes', add "that sparkle"

(If you have a different color eyes than the one above,
please make it up!!)
I DON'T OWN YOU, HETALIA, OR SMEXY ALFRED!

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Chapt. 1 ---> [link]
Chapt. 2 ---> [link]
Chapt. 3 ---> [link]
Chapt. 4 ---> [link]
Chapt. 5 ---> You are here
Chapt. 6 (FINAL) ---> [link]
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:iconskylerreaperwilliams:
SkylerReaperWilliams Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
                                .:WARNING:POINTLESS COMMENT:.
Hmmmmmmm . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Since I don't have ocean green eyes but forest green, imma put 'forest green eyes that could imatate a leaf'. Yup, that sounds good.
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I thought ,"chocolatey brown,"
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numbers3 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
soft earthy brown
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:iconpolliiiiiiiiii:
Polliiiiiiiiii Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
Dark Green Eyes! I like my eyes :3
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:iconjuneanightwind:
juneanightwind Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist
soft earthy brown and a black one
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:iconlolopuppy:
Lolopuppy Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My eyes are grey... I just thought it was cool..
I luv the story so far
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KiruTetsuya Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014
I have black eyes :3
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:iconnomnomsun:
NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014
I have black eyes. Lame, but unique!
"Shining black eyes that put the rare pearl to shame." - epic line there~!
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:iconcandyapplekiss:
CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I have black eyes too, and that's an awesome line there. Bravo! :D
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:iconnomnomsun:
NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
*Looks at your sig*

....
-laughs-

YES, BURN THEM. 
ಠ‿ಠ
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SwaggerJr Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Student General Artist
iiiiiiii fooooouuuuunnnnndddddd yyyyooouuuuuuu
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:iconnomnomsun:
NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
*hides again* :iconhideplz:
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:iconswaggerjr:
SwaggerJr Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student General Artist
the hunt is on *looks everwhere looking badass*
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:iconnomnomsun:
NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
You = :iconbadassplz:
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:iconswaggerjr:
SwaggerJr Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student General Artist
thanks that's what i'll say if i wasn't badass
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Cakeadin Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Is this somehow based on Yankee-kun to Megane-chan (AKA Flunk Punk Rumble) ? :D
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:iconcandyapplekiss:
CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wha—? I don't know what that is. It's a pretty cliche story line, but is that an anime?
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:iconcakeadin:
Cakeadin Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
Nope , it's a manga . But it's kind of similar xD
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harlie15234 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Filmographer
My eyes change color depending on my mood so I looked in the mirror and I have no idea what the freak the color is! France (Freaked Out) [V1]                    ohhhh well that's usal unfortntly.
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ZheAwesomePrussian13 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
You are not alone. Mine do too –.– It's annoying cause one time someone looked into my eyes when I was angry, and they said afterwards that my eyes had turned black...and then just last night my eyes turned pure green again. So...yeah...other people say my eyes have been brown, hazel, gold, white, and one person said red once. It was strange...
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gothy-killer Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
same...thry say my eyes are either red.cerulean.dark green.brown or silver....im confused.....cause my friend told me my eyesturned yellow;
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SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
"soft, earthy brown"
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Mew-Bubble Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
I have amber almost orange eyes. My mom calls them autumnal. Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] 
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist

that's beautiful!! (´∀`)♡ uguu i want pretty eyes too... (;へ;)
hazel's real pretty but blackish-brown? meh. one of the most boring eye colors...
but what your eyes see may be more important what other people see in your eyes.(ゝ‿ ∂)

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Mew-Bubble Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
You can't really see it on first glance though. So people who just kinda look at me in dim lighting see brown. But my hair is the same color. Cutie Dopey Grin - 13 NaNoEmo #7 
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starthecool Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
I wonder how it is to have red-blue eyes *looking in to space*
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aeiou98 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My eyes are straight up gold, but nobody notices. They just think they are brown or hazel. 
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
that sounds beautiful. :3
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aeiou98 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I really love my eyes. ^-^
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crystalyuuki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Its weird I was born with gray eyes and had jet black hail with super light skin, Im a freaking anime character. Kolkolkolkol^J^ im Boerd!
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:iconcandyapplekiss:
CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
that's so cool! I wish I had grey eyes... they're so pretty!!
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:iconcrystalyuuki:
crystalyuuki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Rilly you think it pretty, when people saw me they thought I was blind.
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
They're pretty! *pouts*
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crystalyuuki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Hair I mean Hair!!!Duh
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:iconcrystalyuuki:
crystalyuuki Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
When I was a baby my eyes were grayish, white, like I was blind or something, but then I was growing and my eye color now is ...well..I guess, my mom calls it cherry brown.
I wish my eyes were sill that color........I'd be a real anime character, like Hinata from Naruto.
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My eyes are black
but my Ftaher said it's Brown
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NinjaBitz Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
My eyes are kind of like olive green but with bits of gold and it's odd..
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xXOtAkUxGiRlXx Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
"Angelic and baby-blue" funny that is the color of my eyes xD It's a bright baby blue.
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
awwww lucky!! i have dark brown eyes, and i used to hate them ( ´△`) (i like it more now, but still...) and i always wanted blue eyes... they're so pretty! (´ε` )♡
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xXOtAkUxGiRlXx Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks? I'm glad you think my eyes are pretty, I think Brown eyes are pretty my best friend has brown eyes.Llama Emoji 02 (Blush) [V1] 
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LizzyIngalls Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Angelic and Baby Blue
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Artkittycatforever Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
i wish i didn't have brown eyes they just seem so..... boring :( but if Alfred likes them that makes me feel a bit better! ^^
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:iconcandyapplekiss:
CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
brown eyes are beautiful! my hubbie alberto has dark brown eyes~
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Artkittycatforever Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Yay!! you made me feel a lot better!! :icononiononionplz:
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:iconcandyapplekiss:
CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
really? great to hear I made you feel better! owo
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DJRACHEL2 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"soft, earthy brown" ... i have brownd eye and they are very happy to see this story...  how are you doing?
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you! i am doing well~
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DJRACHEL2 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good what have you been up to?
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KathyBrine Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Writer
My eyes are VERY DARK brown, near to the point of being black.
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