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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN YOU OR HETALIA. ಠ_ಠ

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You were standing in front of your bookshelf and flipping through several books, thinking about which to reread till large, strong arms wrapped around your waist. You heart jumped a bit because of the sudden touch.

"What do you want, Alfred?"

You chuckled, glancing over to your right to see the American's head resting on your shoulder. His baby blue eyes looked into your _(eye color)_ ones. Alfred chuckled and kissed your cheek, making you blush slightly. You were dating him for a while now, and you loved each other as much as your hearts can love.

"Why don't we do a game?"

"Well, I hope it's not twister. It didn't work well as you thought it would last time, right?"

"Aww, babe, it's because you cheated!"

You laughed, remembering the silly game the two of you played. Alfred wanted to play it because, cough, he wanted to. You closed the current book you were skimming through and slid it back in the bookshelf. You walked to the sofa and sat, later being joined by the blonde American, and you rested your head on his broad shoulders.

"What's the game?"

"13 ways to kiss!"

Startled, you looked at your boyfriend, flashing his 'hero smile', and smiled.

"Then can we start with my idea?"

"Sure, babe!"

You ran to the kitchen and shuffled through a cabinet and pulled a box of the thing you needed for the kiss. You skipped back to the sofa and showed Alfred the item.

"P-O-C-K-Y… Pocky?"

"Yup!"

Your Japanese friend, Kiku, had recently showed you a Japanese kissing game, which involved the chocolate-covered pretzel stick. He said there were other flavors or something, but you didn't really care and took the classic chocolate-flavored one. You ripped open the packet, because you were dying to play the game. The game was like that 'Lady and the Tramp' kiss, where you held the snack between the two of you, slowly munching towards the center, and eventually ending with a kiss. The one who is parts first is the looser, but if neither of you do, the one with the most pieces of the pocky stick wins. After you explained the rules and instructions of the game, he smile and took the pocky to his mouth, and you started munching on it.

Through the process, Alfred's bony hands took yours and he munched towards your lips. It soon turned into a sweet, chocolate-tasting kiss, and you played around with it for a while.

"That was awesome!"

"What's next, Al?"

"The ice kiss! I'll be right back."

He quickly sprinted to the freezer and grabbed an ice cube. You knew this kiss, and weren't sure if you could do so well with it—and Alfred guessed this just from a look at your face.

"Chill, babe. This'll work fine!"

"Alright… I'm trusting you."

The two of you held the ice between your lips and quickly melted it, letting it form into a passionate French kiss. You gasped for air when the American let go of your lips.

"Damn it, Al, you're such a good kisser."

"Of course! I wouldn't be your boyfriend if I weren't."

"True, true. Eskimo kiss?"

The two of you snuggled closer together while you rubbed your noses together. You giggled as your boyfriend tickled your nose, as well as giving you a warm embrace. Then Alfred straightened his back and grinned.

"Spider-man kiss?"

"Oh sure, Al. Now hang upside-down dummy."

You got off the sofa while Alfred put his back on the seat of the furniture and hung upside-down, by leaning his head back. You grabbed his head and kissed him sweetly, while Alfred was sucking on your upper-lip, making you tremble slightly.

After that, you did lots more. Like the one where Alfred had kissed you from behind, or the fireworks kiss—where you would put Pop Rocks in your mouths and kiss, only to be surprised by the explosion in both your mouths. Soon, you were down to one last kiss. You wanted to decide the last kiss, but Al convinced you that he should decide by looking at you with the 'You-Cannot-Refuse-This-Puppy-Face'.

"Kiss on the hand."

"What?!"

You exclaimed, puffing your cheeks out like a little child. But before you knew it, Al took your hand and was on his knees.

"I expected something more fun."

"Just let me do this."

He took your left hand and kissed it gently, only to realize a cool metal slip onto your ring finger. You put your right hand over your mouth and gasped. It couldn't possibly be…

"Will you please marry me?"

You hugged Alfred quickly and started to cry. Alfred hugged you back and carried you like a bride while you whispered a thousand 'yes's into his ear.

"Shall we take this to the bedroom?"

"You're so naughty, Alfred F. Jones. But sure, why not?"
I DON'T OWN YOU, ALFRED, OR HETALIA!!

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Sorry, my mom completely banned deviantART from me,
and this is a secret... my mom doesn't know I'm on dA right now.
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mountainsofthemoon Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That ice cube kiss..was that pun intended??   I only got it the second time round. 'Chill, this'll work fine!'

Ba-dum pssh
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FlashKittyStudios Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I laughed so hard at this I started coughing
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Ravelium Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
Ok, I definitely wasn't expecting that ending ♡ and I normally skip the marry themed stories. 
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks for reading! Sorry for the surprise marry-themed story... Why do you skip 'em? Just wondering.
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Ravelium Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014
Don't worry. I find them fluffy (and boring) for my taste, only that. But in your story it was a detail, and it's ok. I skip the ones that are too emotional or cliché.
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Why'd she ban u? My dad usually gets wary when he sees me typing, and he's like who u talking to? I just say I'm commentin
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Miss-Inuyasha Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Do a lemon please
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
L-lemons?! I... I couldn't possibly write about... s... se... sssseeee....ks...
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Miss-Inuyasha Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh okay. I'll do it
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iNSaNiTY-Piano Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
That may be one of the cutest things I have ever read
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Faustita Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
i love the spiderman kiss  haaawwwhhh~ so cute RunSoooo Cute..Onion Muajajaja..How funny..Onion Shy Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1] Blush 
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FloweroftheValleyxD Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Sneaky :iconevilonionplz: I did that too a few years back. But my mom doesn't know what I do on it anymore. She found my best-friend's favorite'd lemons.. it didn't go very well. (I share dA with one of my best friends and she is the whole smut fan.)
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X-ImmortalHeichou-X Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:Kawaii: 
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crg2000 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
KYYYAAAAAA SO CUTE! :Squeal: :iconotakuingplz: :iconeeeeeplz: * squeals around my room while jumping* SOOOO ADORBES!
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crg2000 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This Story is amazing and and.....EEEEEEEEEEEEEE HEE HEE HEE HEE! So much fluff! :iconeeeeeplz:
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HetaliaPandaLuna Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
awwwww! so cutie I love it.
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ahhhh I'm With a Hero yay
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IcyMassacre Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
D'aaaawwwhhh. That's adorable.
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DoitsuIWANTPASTA Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I Wish There Was A Part 2
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You can try to write one!
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animelover-8 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's so cutez

Me: yes al let take this to the bedroom :iconspongebobsmirkplz:
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DetectiveDucktape Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD Dat spongebob face
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
D'AAAWWWWW!!!!

I love the Pop-Rocks idea X3 those are awesome!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
*squeals* It's so cute!
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mjbarberluv Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Cool, you're like a DA superhero. Like America.
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aqualuvsrobin2 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AGHHHH. SO ADORABLE. :iconcannotevenplz: i hope your mom unbans deviant art from you.
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I adore Spiderman so if I could do the spiderman kiss at least once in my life, I would be complete! :spidey: Great one-shot ;)
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KaraAkuma Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
waw...awesome ending I must say, it left me a bit shocked...like >o<
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Yasaijiru7 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
MMMMMM!!! SO KAWAII!!!!
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Somecutechick Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's not a pretzel!!!!!!!
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm sorry!! I didn't know how else to describe it...
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GirlScoutCookies100 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a chocolate creme covered (ACHOO!!! Sorry, I'm allergic to alliteration) biscuit stick :iconiplz: :iconbeatingheartplz: :iconpockyplz:
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Somecutechick Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's like a cookie ms.apple
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Okey...
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Somecutechick Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oops... *giggles* sowy!
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13Youko Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Aw sweet!
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Percabeth1fan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm gonna let you in on a secret…I LOVE IT!!!! It's so sweet and adorable and cute and lovey-dovey and fun and-and-and PERFECT! (Please excuse the excessive use of and)
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CandyAppleKiss Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
LOL, yeah, I'm just really happy you liked it!
>//3//<)b
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Percabeth1fan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i'm really glad that you're really glad. hahaha!
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tremblingheart872 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
AWWWW this is adorable~ so much sweetness~
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Torini-Fettuccini Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
D'awww!! ^^ <3 So cute!
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Yuki-the-Trickster Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwww that was cute!
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AlphiiFire Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahhhh I see whatcha did Thar!!!!
Lol I was totally thinking he would propose AS i was reading that part!
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littlecookiefan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was beautiful and made my day -- thanks!
ANd, yeah, my mum did that once too... Only thing you can do is wait for her to calm down ;D
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LilianLuvsLovi Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahahahahehe~ kyuute~!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Who's stalking who now?! :mwahaha:
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LilianLuvsLovi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOD. We're stalking each other!!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I KNOW!!!
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LilianLuvsLovi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay~! (Forever stalkers)
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HillsOfSilence Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Kya! So cute! <333
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